Are toys now the same as in the past? What\'s the difference?
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When I was baby toy is trance car.
But now toys are R.C.car and dron. My trance car is activity toy but R.C.car and dron are control toys.
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When I was baby toy is trance car.
>> When I was a baby, car trance toys were famous.
But now toys are R.C.car and dron.
>> But now toys like RC cars and drones are famous.
My trance car is activity toy but R.C.car and dron are control toys.
>> My trance car is a manual toy but RC cars and drones are automatic control-operated toys.
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