Are violent video games bad? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. It\'s because most of violent video games are makes people emotionless. So in reality, if they killed someone some users don\'t feel sense of guilty. And they watched a lot video, maybe they addicted in that videos.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy. ^^
I agree that violent video games are never good. They are actually harmful because the violence that they depict give people the impression that it\'s okay to do those.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re warm and safe at school.
See you in class tonight. :)
~Teacher Charry
I agree that violent video games are never good. They are actually harmful because the violence that they depict give people the impression that it\'s okay to do those.
Anyhow, I hope you\'re warm and safe at school.
See you in class tonight. :)
~Teacher Charry
>> Yes, violent video games are bad.
It\'s because most of violent video games are makes people emotionless.
>> It\'s because most violent video games make people emotionless.
So in reality, if they killed someone some users don\'t feel sense of guilty.
>> So in reality, if they kill someone in the game, some users don\'t feel a sense of guilt.
And they watched a lot video, maybe they addicted in that videos.
>> In addition, if they watch a lot of violent videos, they may be addicted in those videos.
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