Are you a busy man?
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1. Are you a busy man?
I am not a busy man. But, I am trying to spend all day`s time effectively like a busy man.
2. What would you do if you had a few extra hours in a day?
I`d take a look around near distance suburban from my place and get some fresh air. So that would make me relaxed on my mind.
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Thank you for this Sir Hyujji!
1. Are you a busy man?
I am not a busy man.
I am not a busy man.
>>> correct
But, I am trying to spend all day`s time effectively like a busy man.
>>> correct
>>> correct
>>> OR: But I am trying to spend my day effectively like a busy man.
2. What would you do if you had a few extra hours in a day?
I`d take a look around near distance suburban from my place and get some fresh air. So that would make me relaxed on my mind.
2. What would you do if you had a few extra hours in a day?
I`d take a look around near distance suburban from my place and get some fresh air. So that would make me relaxed on my mind.
>>> I`d take a look around nearby suburban places from my place and get some fresh air to make me relax my mind.
>>> OR: I\'d go take a look around suburbs near my place and get some fresh air to calm my mind.
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