Are you a chatty person or do you only speak when you're ?

2016-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I am an introvert and more the listener type. I am a person who only speaks when I’m spoken to. I usually stay calm and quiet. I don’t have sense of humor. This is one of the things that I don’t like about myself. I sometimes feel like I want to be a person who can lighten up the mood, make attendees laugh and rock the house. I envy a person who is good at leading a talk and making jokes. He/she can dominate a conversation naturally without hurting other’s feelings. Without him/her, a diner or a gathering will be boring. So, whenever an informal get-together takes place, he/she is always invited and welcomed. I want to be an eloquent speaker. It’s very important to have good social talking skills especially during in social activities such as friend parties and chit-chat with your co-workers and friends. Good conversationalists talk about plain, simple subjects when trying to get to know and get along with other people. Forget about being eloquent, clever, or pretentious.

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Good day Sir [이름]! Did you have enough sleep last night? I hope you did. How was your day? Anyway, thank you for sharing a lot of things about your self. i really admire you for being expressive especially in class. I enjoy every minute because your ideas are great. Keep up the good work. See you in class. Teacher Nina   I am an introvert and more the listener type. >> correct I am a person who only speaks when I’m spoken to. >> correct I usually stay calm and quiet. >> correct I don’t have sense of humor. >> I don\'t have a sense of humore. This is one of the things that I don’t like about myself. >> correct I sometimes feel like I want to be a person who can lighten up the mood, make attendees laugh and rock the house. >> correct I envy a person who is good at leading a talk and making jokes. >> correct He/she can dominate a conversation naturally without hurting other’s feelings. >> correct Without him/her, a diner or a gathering will be boring. >> Without him/her, a dinner or a gathering will be boring. So, whenever an informal get-together takes place, he/she is always invited and welcomed. >> correct I want to be an eloquent speaker. >> correct It’s very important to have good social talking skills especially during in social activities such as friend parties and chit-chat with your co-workers and friends. >> It’s very important to have good social talking skills especially during social activities such as friend parties and chit-chat with your co-workers and friends. Good conversationalists talk about plain, simple subjects when trying to get to know and get along with other people. >> correct Forget about being eloquent, clever, or pretentious. >> correct

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