Are you a creative person?
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I would be a creative man because creativity is one of the most needed abilities in any parts of the world. How can I creative enough to garner the attention from people around me? I think the key to being creative is the combination of existing things in a new way. There is nothing new under the sun, which gets to more clearly year after year. Therefore, in the world that demands creative people, I need to mull over the way of combining what I have or know into new things.
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Hi Sir Steve!
Thank you for sending your homework.
Being creative indeed has different definition.
It depends on the person how imaginative they can be.
Andrea
I would be a creative man because creativity is one of the most needed abilities in any parts of the world.
>> I can be a creative man because creativity is one of the most needed abilities in any part of the world.
How can I creative enough to garner the attention from people around me?
>> Correct
I think the key to being creative is the combination of existing things in a new way.
>> Correct
>> OR: I think the key to being creative is being innovative.
There is nothing new under the sun, which gets to more clearly year after year.
>> There is nothing new under the sun, which gets clearer one year after the other.
Therefore, in the world that demands creative people, I need to mull over the way of combining what I have or know into new things.
>> Correct
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