Are you a good patient when you\'re sick? Explain your answer.
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I\'m not a good patient when my sick because health is very most important.
But I think the sick is very dangerous.
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Here\'s your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please go over the revisions given below. Enjoy the rest of the day!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Are you a good patient when you\'re sick? Explain your answer.
I\'m not a good patient when my sick because health is very most important. But I think the sick is very dangerous.
>> I\'m not a good patient when I\'m sick because although health is very important, I think being sick is very dangerous.
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