Are you a health-conscious person? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
From this early year I started about my health so I on a diet and I am always trying to eat less
I wish I want to be a health granma
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ju Mi! Our health is precious; therefore, we should take good care of it. ^^ Thank you and have a great day!
~T. Jewel
From this early year I started about my health so I on a diet and I am always trying to eat less.
>>Since the beginning of this year, I’ve been focusing on my health, so I’m on a diet and trying to eat less.
I wish I want to be a health granma
I wish I want to be a health granma
>>I want to be a healthy grandma.
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