Are you a healthy person? How often do you get sick? What are the best ways to avoid getting sick?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I\'m not a healthy person right now.
I get sick once a year. I don\'t get sick that often.
The best way not to get sick is to wash my hands well when I get home. Drinking a lot of water is a good way too.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you so much for your honest answer. We can\'t avoid being sick nowadays. I agree with your answer, dear. For us not to get sick, we need to have good hygiene and a healthy lifestyle. Keep up the good work! Stay safe and healthy, [이름]!
-T.ERIN^^.
No, I\'m not a healthy person right now.
>>Nowadays, I am not a healthy person.
I get sick once a year. I don\'t get sick that often.
>>I don\'t get sick that easy, but I get sick once a year.
The best way not to get sick is to wash my hands well when I get home.
>>One of the factors to stay healthy is to wash our hands properly every time we do something.
Drinking a lot of water is a good way too.
>>correct.
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