Are you a healthy person? What do you do about it?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m a healthy right now because I\'m young, however I\'m not a healthy person actually.
When I was young, I caught a cold frequently.
Anyway I think that I should have more muscles to live healthy life.
So, I think that exercise is very important for healthy life.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Let\'s invest on good health by exercising regularly.^^
Thank you for your homework. See you in class!
Kelly^^
I\'m a healthy right now because I\'m young, however I\'m not a healthy person actually.>> Correct
When I was young, I caught a cold frequently.
>> Correct
Anyway I think that I should have more muscles to live healthy life.
When I was young, I caught a cold frequently.
>> Correct
Anyway I think that I should have more muscles to live healthy life.
>> Anyway I think that I should build more muscles to live a healthy life.
So, I think that exercise is very important for healthy life.
So, I think that exercise is very important for healthy life.
>> Correct
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