Are you a leader or a follower? Explain why you feel that way.

2020-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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From my experiences at work and what I have lived so far, to figure it out what kind of person I am, I think I am much closer to a leader type. Of course, I have acted as a follower in my 20\'s or 30\'s. How can I distinguish a leader from a follower? I think it depends on whether I have an initiative on something to make the decisions. at the same time, I fulfilled all responsibility to manage it, which means I started, manage and finish it under my full control.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

The change to plural form in some of your terms aims to make the thought more general.

There are also some changes in the patterns of your sentences.

Take note of the suggestions below.

As always, I appreciate what you wrote today.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

From my experiences at work and what I have lived so far, to figure it out what kind of person I am, I think I am much closer to a leader type.

>> From my experiences at work and what I have lived so far, to figure out what kind of person I am, I think I am much closer to a leader type.

Of course, I have acted as a follower in my 20\'s or 30\'s.

>> Correct
How can I distinguish a leader from a follower?

>> Correct
I think it depends on whether I have an initiative on something to make the decisions.

>> I think it depends on whether I have an initiative to make decisions about things.
at the same time, I fulfilled all responsibility to manage it, which means I started, manage and finish it under my full control.

>> At the same time, I should fulfill all responsibility to manage them, which means I started, managed and finished them under my full control.

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