Are you a pet lover? How do people care for animals?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like a pet.
Especially, I prefer dogs rather than cats.
I hate cat’s eyes.
When I see the cat’s eyes, I feel scared.
But recentely many of people loke a cat and enjoy keeping cats.
People who have a pet take care of their pets very carefully like their own baby.
So, in the case of animal abuse, people are to be punished.
If I had a pet, I would raise a puppy.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Ms. [이름] [이름]! Pets bring happiness to everyone\'s home.
Aki~
I like a pet.
>>> I like pets.
>>> I like having a pet.
Especially, I prefer dogs rather than cats.
Especially, I prefer dogs rather than cats.
>>> I specifically prefer dogs than cats.
>>> I prefer having dog rather than cats.
I hate cat’s eyes.
I hate cat’s eyes.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I dislike the eyes of cats.
When I see the cat’s eyes, I feel scared.
When I see the cat’s eyes, I feel scared.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I get scared when I look at the cat\'s eyes
But recentely many of people loke a cat and enjoy keeping cats.
But recentely many of people loke a cat and enjoy keeping cats.
>>> Recently, many people take and enjoy keeping cats.
People who have a pet take care of their pets very carefully like their own baby.
People who have a pet take care of their pets very carefully like their own baby.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> People consider their pets like having their own babies.
So, in the case of animal abuse, people are to be punished.
So, in the case of animal abuse, people are to be punished.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> People who abused animals must be punished.
If I had a pet, I would raise a puppy
If I had a pet, I would raise a puppy
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> i would raise a puppy as a pet.
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