Are you a risk taker?

2017-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I'm maybe a risk taker. Because I hate boring and tedious things. So I usually do new things and try to do new things every week. Its strength is to challenge something and to experience variety. But its weakness is to have a superficial knowledge.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Thank you for your composition.^^I must agree that you are such a risk taker. Just keep on learning and discovering things on your own. Have a happy and fun life!
~Kelly^^
I\'m maybe a risk taker.
>> Correct.
Because I hate boring and tedious things.
>> Correct.
So I usually do new things and try to do new things every week.
>> So, I usually try to do new things every week.
Its strength is to challenge something and to experience variety.
>> My strength is to challenge myself in doing something and to experience variety of things.
But its weakness is to have a superficial knowledge.
>> But, my weakness is to have superficial knowledge on ____.

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