Are you a social person? How much time do you spend with people every week?

2020-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

학생이 쓴 원문

I am a social person. I continued to work after marriage I quit my job as I got older, but I keep working. Several programs have been closed due to the coronavirus. But I keep doing art on Monday and Friday I always play golf on weekends. I spend a lot of time in hobbies and social encounters. Also, others speak of me. Elegant, diligent, has power Perhaps I think that I am a person who is good at social life.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for sending your homework today. It\'s good to know that you are keeping your social circles despite this pandemic. Keep doing it because I know that it makes you happy. Enjoy your day!~~T.Dee

I am a social person.

>>CORRECT!
I continued to work after marriage

>>I continued to work after I got married.

>>OR: I continued to work after
I quit my job as I got older, but I keep working.

>>I quit my job as I got older, but I kept working.
Several programs have been closed due to the coronavirus.

>>Several programs have been closed due to the corona virus pandemic.
But I keep doing art on Monday and Friday

>>CORRECT!
I always play golf on weekends.

>>CORRECT!
I spend a lot of time in hobbies and social encounters.

>>I spend a lot of time doing my hobbies and having social encounters.
Also, others speak of me.

>>CORRECT!
Elegant, diligent, has power

>>They say that I am elegant, diligent and is powerful.
Perhaps I think that I am a person who is good at social life.

>>Perhaps I think that I am a person who is good at social life.

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