Are you a social person? How much time do you spend with people every week?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I took care of my children, I was a full-time housewife.
After my children entered college, I worked in society.
After doing social work, I have known many people.
I spend a busy day playing golf, shopping, dancing, painting, drumming and trekking.
I am good at adjusting to society, getting along with people, and many people like me.
Is this a social person? If this is a social person, it is me.
I have almost a week\'s schedule. In addition, the people I meet are always the same.
Occasionally, a friend\'s friend is introduced, so we can join our team or meet a new team at a golf club.
I spend more time going out and working than I do at home
There is more work outside the house than the housework.
I usually leave home around 9 am and come back around 4 pm.
I think I spend more time outside than a normal housewife.
강사 첨삭
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>>CORRECT!
After my children entered college, I worked in society.
After my children entered college, I worked in society.
>>After my children entered college, I joined community activities.
After doing social work, I have known many people.
After doing social work, I have known many people.
>>CORRECT!
I spend a busy day playing golf, shopping, dancing, painting, drumming and trekking.
I spend a busy day playing golf, shopping, dancing, painting, drumming and trekking.
>>CORRECT!
I am good at adjusting to society, getting along with people, and many people like me.
I am good at adjusting to society, getting along with people, and many people like me.
>>CORRECT!
Is this a social person? If this is a social person, it is me.
Is this a social person? If this is a social person, it is me.
>>Is this a social person? If you\'re looking for one, that\'s what I am.
I have almost a week\'s schedule. In addition, the people I meet are always the same.
I have almost a week\'s schedule. In addition, the people I meet are always the same.
>>CORRECT!
Occasionally, a friend\'s friend is introduced, so we can join our team or meet a new team at a golf club.
Occasionally, a friend\'s friend is introduced, so we can join our team or meet a new team at a golf club.
>>CORRECT!
I spend more time going out and working than I do at home
I spend more time going out and working than I do at home
>>CORRECT!
There is more work outside the house than the housework.
There is more work outside the house than the housework.
>>CORRECT!
I usually leave home around 9 am and come back around 4 pm.
I usually leave home around 9 am and come back around 4 pm.
>>CORRECT!
I think I spend more time outside than a normal housewife.
I think I spend more time outside than a normal housewife.
>>CORRECT!
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