Are you a spender or a saver?
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I\'m a spender of money. Because, I spend money at cafe almost everyday. And, when I receive monthly money, I hang out withmy friends for shopping, eating something delicious. Moreover, If I save money, this action is to buy somethiong expensive.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
Both are okay as long as you handle your expenses wisely. :)
I\'m a spender of money. Because, I spend money at cafe almost everyday.
>> I am a spender of money because I am at the cafe almost everyday.
And, when I receive monthly money, I hang out withmy friends for shopping, eating something delicious.
>> When I receive my monthly allowance, I hang out with my friends and go shopping and eat delicious food.
Moreover, If I save money, this action is to buy somethiong expensive.
>> Moreover, if I save money, I usually spend it eventually on something expensive.
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