Are you a spender or a saver of money? Why?

2021-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I am a saver of money. although I not work but i receive pocket money to my parent. so from when I were young always have saving pocket money. because i save money to prepare for anything in my future.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

Both are okay as long as you handle your expenses wisely. :)

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I am a saver of money.

>> CORRECT

although I not work but i receive pocket money to my parent.

>> Although I don\'t work but I receive some pocket money from my parents.

So from when I were young always have saving pocket money.

>> Since I was young, I have always been saving my pocket money.

because i save money to prepare for anything in my future.

>> I save my money to prepare for anything in the future.

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