Are you a spender or a saver of money? Why?

2021-07-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think I am closer to a saver of money than a spender of money. Because I don\'t want to spend money and I don\'t except it is nessecary. And I think we don\'t have to spend money for something that it is unessecary. So I think I am a saver for money and I think saver is better.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

Both are okay as long as you handle your expenses wisely. :)

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I think I am closer to a saver of money than a spender of money.
>> I think am more of a saver than a spender of money.

Because I don\'t want to spend money and I don\'t except it is nessecary.
>>It is because I don\'t spend money on unnecessary things.

And I think we don\'t have to spend money for something that it is unessecary.
>> I think we shouldn\'t do this either.

So I think I am a saver for money and I think saver is better.
>> So I think that I am saver which is better.

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