Are you a stay-at-home person or a going-out person?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am introverted ,so I get an energy at home.
I like rather listening with my friends to talk to.
If I have to speak lots of my customers on business,
I also need my own time to take a rest.
Nowadays, I try to think them as a closed neighborhoods.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Direct sentences are the way to go.
It makes your statement understandable and clear.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I am introverted ,so I get an energy at home.
>> I am introverted so I get energized at home.
I like rather listening with my friends to talk to.
I like rather listening with my friends to talk to.
>> I\'d rather listen to my friends while they talk.
If I have to speak lots of my customers on business, I also need my own time to take a rest.
If I have to speak lots of my customers on business, I also need my own time to take a rest.
>> I usually need some time for myself to rest after speaking to lots of customers at my business.
Nowadays, I try to think them as a closed neighborhoods.
Nowadays, I try to think them as a closed neighborhoods.
>> Nowadays, I try to think them as neighbors who are close to me.
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