Are you a sweet tooth? Why or why not?
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~Teacher Lucy
I am a sweet tooth according to my food life.
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>>Accordingly, I am a sweet tooth.
After having a meal with my friend, we usually go to cafe to eat dessert and talk together.
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>> After having a meal with my friend, we usually go to cafes to eat dessert and talk together.
We said we are full but we can eat dessert.
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>>We said we are full but we still can eat dessert
We also said that meal stomach is separated with a dessert stomach.
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So, we like to find cafe which have delicious desserts.
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>>So, we like to find cafe which have delectable desserts.
It is like a kind of addiction.
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I want to eat sweet food often.
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Especially, it is more attractive after having a meal.
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Most of meals are salty dish.
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So, it is harmonious to eat main dish and dessert.
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Also, women usually are attracted sweet food like chocolate in a menstrual period.
>>Also, women usually are attracted to sweet food like chocolates in a menstrual period.
It is natural phenomenon.
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Thus, I eat sweet foods more in this period.
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So, I am a sweet tooth.
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