Are you a task oriented person or a people oriented person?
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I\'m a task oriented person. People are important to do task, but if I think of people only, the task cannot be done. It sounds like cold, actually, I am a warm-hearted person.
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Hi [이름]. Thank you for doing your homework. Keep it up. - T. Jasper
I\'m a task oriented person.
>> CORRECT
People are important to do task, but if I think of people only, the task cannot be done.
>> It\'s important for people to do the task, but if we\'re going to think about the people, the task may not be done.
It sounds like cold, actually, I am a warm-hearted person.
>> I may sound cold, but actually, I am a warm-hearted person.
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