Are you afraid of a snake?
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I\'m very afraid of a snake. I think most people are afraid of a snake. First of all I hate a snake wiggles and I feel like that is awfully gross. Secondly, the snakes are very fast and they also have poison so if you were bitten from a snake you could die. If I were in the forest I wouldn\'t be able to be aware it is close to me and attack me. I think snakes are super dangerous.
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T. DON
I\'m very afraid of a snake. I think most people are afraid of a snake.
First of all I hate a snake wiggles and I feel like that is awfully
gross. Secondly, the snakes are very fast and they also have poison so
if you were bitten from a snake you could die. If I were in the forest I
wouldn\'t be able to be aware it is close to me and attack me. I think
snakes are super dangerous.
>> I\'m very afraid of a snake. I think most people are afraid snakes.
First of all, I hate a snake when it wiggles its tail and I feel like that is awfully
gross. Secondly, the snakes are very fast and they also have poison so
if you were bitten by a snake, you could die. If I were in the forest, I
wouldn\'t be able to be notice that it is close to me and attack me. I think
snakes are super dangerous.
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