Are you afraid of getting old?

2019-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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I\'m afraid of getting old, because I should to earn more ability and completely stand on my feet alone. But on the other hand, I want to be maturer and wish to know how to deal with everything. Getting old has plenty of meanings. When a person gets older, it means he will lose his physical, mental power. And furthermore, we could suffer more severe disease than we were young. Some people think the old negatively and regard the seniors as unuseful men. However, aging has not always negative, tragic sense. Losing the ability and forgetting everything are not surely truths. An important research reports that it is just prejudice and the mind faculty has the biggest capacity at around 60. Besides, they have other strong points. Seniors have endurance and tenderness and know very well how to get on with others.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


Thank you for making your composition.

I appreciate your effort!


T. Lainey <\",)))><


I\'m afraid of getting old, because I should to earn more ability and completely stand on my feet alone.

>>> I\'m afraid of getting old because I should learn more abilities and completely stand on my own feet.


But on the other hand, I want to be maturer and wish to know how to deal with everything.

>>> But on the other hand, I want to be more mature and I wish to know more about dealing with everything.


Getting old has plenty of meanings.

>>> correct


When a person gets older, it means he will lose his physical, mental power.

>>> correct


And furthermore, we could suffer more severe disease than we were young.

>>> correct


Some people think the old negatively and regard the seniors as unusual men.

>>> correct


However, aging has not always negative, tragic sense.

>>> correct


Losing the ability and forgetting everything are not surely truths.

>>> correct


An important research reports that it is just prejudice and the mind faculty has the biggest capacity at around 60.

>>> correct


Besides, they have other strong points. Seniors have endurance and tenderness and know very well how to get on with others.

>>> correct

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