Are you afraid of getting old?
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I\'m afraid of getting old, because I should to earn more ability and completely stand on my feet alone.
>>> I\'m afraid of getting old because I should learn more abilities and completely stand on my own feet.
But on the other hand, I want to be maturer and wish to know how to deal with everything.
>>> But on the other hand, I want to be more mature and I wish to know more about dealing with everything.
Getting old has plenty of meanings.
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When a person gets older, it means he will lose his physical, mental power.
>>> correct
And furthermore, we could suffer more severe disease than we were young.
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Some people think the old negatively and regard the seniors as unusual men.
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However, aging has not always negative, tragic sense.
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Losing the ability and forgetting everything are not surely truths.
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An important research reports that it is just prejudice and the mind faculty has the biggest capacity at around 60.
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Besides, they have other strong points. Seniors have endurance and tenderness and know very well how to get on with others.
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