Are you afraid of getting old? Why?

2017-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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I'm afraid of getting old for the reasons. The first reason is, I'm not sure my future, so I can't predict anything yet, which make me afraid. I don't know what I will be, which jop I will get, and who I will marry with. Even though it usually help me work hard, it gives me some stress. The second reason is, I will become to lose my strength. My age is getting old, and can't exercise hard because I should be careful when I move my body. I also lose passion to achieve my goal. I've realized by seeing the people who is around me. For example, my father had a lot of passion about various business, but now he has been gone it. Finally, I don't want to get wrinkle on my face. I know it is one of the most natural things while I'm getting old. I want to keep my skin and health forever. In summary, I'm fearful of getting old because of the metioned reasons.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your insights about getting old. I totally agree with you that we all fear getting old because we cannot predict what\'s going to happen. But we should enjoy each day of our lives. We should be thankful for all the graces we receive.^^

~Kelly^^

I\'m afraid of getting old for the reasons.

>> I\'m afraid of getting old for some reasons.
The first reason is, I\'m not sure my future, so I can\'t predict anything yet, which make me afraid.

>> The first reason is, I\'m not sure about my future, so I can\'t predict anything yet, which makes me feel afraid.

I don\'t know what I will be, which jop I will get, and who I will marry with.

>> I don\'t know what I will become, which job I will get, and who I will marry with.

Even though it usually help me work hard, it gives me some stress.

>> Even though it usually helps me work hard, it gives me some stress.
The second reason is, I will become to lose my strength.

>> The second reason is, I will lose my strength.

My age is getting old, and can\'t exercise hard because I should be careful when I move my body.

>> I am getting old, and I can\'t exercise hard because I should be careful when I move my body.

I also lose passion to achieve my goal.

>> I also lose my passion to achieve my goal.

I\'ve realized by seeing the people who is around me.

>> I\'ve realized it by seeing the people around me.

For example, my father had a lot of passion about various business, but now he has been gone it.

>> For example, my father had a lot of passion about various businesses, but now he\'s not that passionate about it anymore.
Finally, I don\'t want to get wrinkle on my face.

>> Correct.

I know it is one of the most natural things while I\'m getting old.

>> I know it is a natural process to go through when I get old.

I want to keep my skin and health forever.

>> I want to keep my young looking skin and health forever.
In summary, I\'m fearful of getting old because of the metioned reasons.

>> In summary, I\'m fearful of getting old because of the reasons that I mentioned.

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