Are you afraid of heights?
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Sometimes I’m afraid of heights when I’m on the high place where the floor is made of glass or there are not any walls like outside. If I have to do bungee jumping from very high place I would absolutely be super scared. But I’m not afraid of it when I’m in a normal high building surrounded by walls and windows like my house and other skyscrapers.
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T. DON
Sometimes I’m afraid of heights when I’m on the high place where the
floor is made of glass or there are not any walls like outside. If I
have to do bungee jumping from very high place I would absolutely be
super scared. But I’m not afraid of it when I’m in a normal high
building surrounded by walls and windows like my house and other
skyscrapers.
>> Sometimes I’m afraid of heights when I’m on a high place where the
floor is made of glass or there are no walls like an open space. If I
have to do bungee jump from a very high place I would absolutely be
super scared. But I’m not afraid of it when I’m in a normal high
building surrounded by walls and windows like my house and other
skyscrapers.
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