Are you afraid of needles?

No, I am not afraid of needles. I heard regarding phobia of sharp things. One of my friends has that phobia. So whenever she see or imagine the pointy things, She feel afraid and imagine that these things attack her. On the contray, In my case, when I imagin needles, I remind my good memory, which was sewing in home economics when I was a middle school student. Although needles sometimes make our fingers painful, they are very useful.

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No, I am not afraid of needles.

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I heard regarding phobia of sharp things.

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>>OR: I heard about phobia of sharp things.

One of my friends has that phobia. 

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So whenever she see or imagine the pointy things, She feel afraid and imagine that these things attack her.

>>> So, whenever she sees or imagine the pointy things, she feels afraid and imagine that these things attack her.

 On the contray, In my case, when I imagin needles, I remind my good memory, which was sewing in home economics when I was a middle school student.

>>> On the contrary, in my case, when I imagine needles, I remind my good memory, which was sewn in home economics when I was a middle school student.

 Although needles sometimes make our fingers painful, they are very useful.

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