Are you afraid of what other people think of you?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, I used to think of it before when I was adolescence. But as getting older, I realized that most of people don\'t care about it less than I thought. So now, I don\'t care of what people think about me. In addition to that, I can enjoy doing something whatever I like.
강사 첨삭
Hi Eric!
What a nice insight from you! I agree! Thank you for answering your homework diligently!
[이름]cerely,
T. Ara
Of course, I used to think of it before when I was adolescence.
>>> Of course, I used to think of it before when I was an adolescent.
But as getting older, I realized that most of people don\'t care about it less than I thought.
>>> But as I got older, I realized that most people don\'t care about it less than I thought.
So now, I don\'t care of what people think about me.
>>> So now, I don\'t care what people think about me.
In addition to that, I can enjoy doing something whatever I like.
>>> CORRECT!
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