Are you always around when your loved ones need you?
학생이 쓴 원문
No, I am not.
Because we are very far away.
I have to take the subway for 2 hours to meet him
So I try to make phone calls often.
If something big happens, I\'ll be right with him.
Although I\'am so sorry, because I am always not around him, I think it is possible to overcome.
강사 첨삭
No, I am not.
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Because we are very far away.
>> CORRECT
I have to take the subway for 2 hours to meet him
>> CORRECT
So I try to make phone calls often.
>> CORRECT
If something big happens, I\'ll be right with him.
>> CORRECT
Although I\'am so sorry, because I am always not around him, I think it is possible to overcome.
>> Although I feel so sorry, because I am not always around him, I think it is possible to overcome.
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