Are you ambitious enough to achieve the goals you set?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I have it in my heart. I am enthusiastic. But I don\'t be hurry to achieve my goals. The most improtant thing is to keep going for attaining them. We need not perfect, but keep them in our mind .
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ms. [Name]! I hope all your goals materialize and may you achieve all of them. Good luck!
Yes, I have it in my heart.
>>> correct
I am enthusiastic.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I am filled with enthusiasm about it.
But I don\'t be hurry to achieve my goals.
>>> But I am not in a hurry to achieve my goals.
The most improtant thing is to keep going for attaining them.
>>> The most important thing is to keep going in attaining them.
We need not perfect, but keep them in our mind.
>>> We do not need to be perfect, but we should keep them in our mind.
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