Are you and your friends competitive with each other? In which areas do you compete?
학생이 쓴 원문
I competing with my friend in games because my friend better playing games than I so I want to win my friend.
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Are you and your friends competitive with each other? In which areas do you compete?
I competing with my friend in games because my friend better playing games than I so I want to win my friend.
>> I compete with my friend in games because my friend is better at playing games than I am, so I want to beat him.
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