Are you body conscious or health conscious?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, i am! This is because i’m crazy about wearing to match associate with clothes. And my friend, cousin sister, and boyfriend are very thin. So i take a picture with them, i worry my face takes too big. So i conscious my body. But i don’t exercise.😭
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름] [이름]! It\'s common to feel self-conscious, especially around others whose bodies differ from yours. Remember, beauty comes in all shapes and sizes. While exercise can be beneficial for both physical and mental well-being, it\'s important to appreciate your body for all it can do. Be kind to yourself and embrace your uniqueness.
~T. Jenna
Yes, i am!
>> Well, I\'m more of a body conscious person.
This is because i’m crazy about wearing to match associate with clothes.
>> This is because I\'m crazy about wearing clothes that match and associate with each other.
And my friend, cousin sister, and boyfriend are very thin.
Correct, or
>> What\'s more, my friend, cousin, and boyfriend are all very slim.
So i take a picture with them, i worry my face takes too big.
>> So, when I take a picture with them, I worry that my face looks too big.
So i conscious my body.
>> So, I become conscious of my body.
But, I don’t exercise.
Correct, or
>> Despite that, I don\'t workout.
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