Are you careful when using electricity? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t touch a plug and a soket with wet hands because if touch with wet hands, get shocked and a plug can breaking down.
And I use a plug slowly and carefully when I using electricity.
If use electricity must be careful.
강사 첨삭
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Here\'s your revised homework. Many thanks for sending it. Please take a look at the few revisions and alternative expressions provided. Have a good evening!
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Jean~~
Are you careful when using electricity? Explain your answer.
I don\'t touch a plug and a soket with wet hands because if touch with wet hands, get shocked and a plug can breaking down.
>> I don\'t touch a plug and a socket with wet hands because if touch them with wet hands, get shocked and a plug can break down.
And I use a plug slowly and carefully when I using electricity.
>> Also, I use a plug slowly and carefully when I use electricity.
If use electricity must be careful.
>> One must be careful when using electricity.
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