Are you comfortable living under the new normal?
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There is nothing more comfortable in the new normal compared to the previous era when I could go everywhere and do everything without any restrictions. 
Someday, this highly contagious virus will be conquered by us with global efforts, and we are going to be able to do everything akin to before.
Nonetheless, this would be possible under stricter hygienic regulations. To combine with advanced technology, we would use more unmanned services through the internet, kiosks, and auto-operated vehicles. 
I am quite a tech-friendly person. Moreover, I am sometimes uncomfortable as I have to use customer services talking a lot with strangers. Thus, I buy more goods online shops. 
Additionally, I have been accustomed to using tele-conference Apps. like Zoom, I even think this could not perfectly cover meetings in person.  
There may be more severe difficulties to adjust under the new normal, so I should wait and see what will happen.
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Hi [이름]! Continue on doing your best!
-Teacher Abigail^^
Are you comfortable living under the new normal?
There is nothing more comfortable in the new normal compared to the previous era when I could go everywhere and do everything without any restrictions.
>>CORRECT!
Someday, this highly contagious virus will be conquered by us with global efforts, and we are going to be able to do everything akin to before.
>>CORRECT!
Nonetheless, this would be possible under stricter hygienic regulations.
>>CORRECT!
To combine with advanced technology, we would use more unmanned services through the internet, kiosks, and auto-operated vehicles.
>>With advanced technology, we would use more unmanned services through the internet, kiosks, and auto-operated vehicles.
I am quite a tech-friendly person.
>>CORRECT!
Moreover, I am sometimes uncomfortable as I have to use customer services talking a lot with strangers.
>>Moreover, I am sometimes uncomfortable as I have to use customer services and talk a lot with strangers.
Thus, I buy more goods online shops.
>>Thus, I buy more goods in online shops.
Additionally, I have been accustomed to using tele-conference Apps. like Zoom, I even think this could not perfectly cover meetings in person.
>>Additionally, I have been accustomed in using teleconference applications like Zoom, and I even think that this could not perfectly cover meetings in person.
There may be more severe difficulties to adjust under the new normal, so I should wait and see what will happen.
>>CORRECT!
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