Are you concerned about other people’s opinion of you?
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Hello there Ms. [이름]!;)
You\'ve got a point there. I think, we are mature enough if we accept embarrassing but helpful criticisms from others.
Anyway, let talk more on this in class.
See you in minutes.
Teacher Rowena
Yes, I’m very concerned about other people’s opinion of me, especially people who have close relationship with me.
>> Better: Yes, I\'m very concerned about other people\'s opinion of me, especially to those people who are close to me.
I think it’s very important to listen to their opinion of me because they want me to be a better person.
>>CORRECT!
That’s why they give me advice.
>> Better: That\'s why they advise me.
OR: That\'s why they give me a piece of advice.
Some pieces of the advice make me embarrassed and displeased, but I know they will lead me to the right ways.
>> Better:Some pieces of the advice embarrassed and displeased me, but I know they will lead me to the right way.
OR: Some pieces of the advice embarrassed and displeased me, but I know it will lead me to the right path.
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