Are you confident ?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young , I was shy.
When teacher ask a question to me.
My face became red.
Especially my heart was beating in front of many people.
Fortunately, It’s better now.
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Are you confident?
When I was young , I was shy.
>> or: I was quite shy in my youth.
When teacher ask a question to me. My face became red.
>> When my teachers asked me questions, my face would turn pink or red.
>> OR: I would blush when my teacher asked me a question.
Especially my heart was beating in front of many people.
>> Most especially, my heart would beat fast when I was in front of many people.
Fortunately, It’s better now.
>> OR: The good news is that I\'ve become a lot more confident now.
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