Are you contented with your height? Why or why not?

2017-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Honestly, I'm a bit contented with my height cause I'm a little bit small than the other kids. For example, the average height of fourth graders are 145, but I'm 136. So that is my complex. But in the article, a fifty year old man named Mr.Basori is just 29 inches(73.66cm) and he already stopped growing. But I'm able to grow more than Mr. [Name], and I'm already taller than him. Like Mr. [Name], I would not have a complex of being short, and I will do many exercises, so I will try to increase my height.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ji Su! ^^

A sunny afternoon to you ^^ 


Thank you for going over this composition and sending it to me. :)

Even me, I\'m not that tall :D I\'m just 158cm but it\'s okay, I also feel good with my height.

And you are already beautiful as you are, dear. :)


See you! ^^


Teacher Glenda



Honestly, I\'m a bit contented with my height cause I\'m a little bit small than the other kids.

>> Correct

or

>> Honestly, I\'m contented with height because I\'m a little bit small than other kids.

For example, the average height of fourth graders are 145, but I\'m 136.

>> Correct

So that is my complex.

>> Correct

But in the article, a fifty year old man named Mr.Basori is just 29 inches(73.66cm) and he already stopped growing.

>> Correct

But I\'m able to grow more than Mr. [Name], and I\'m already taller than him.

>> Correct
 Like Mr. [Name], I would not have a complex of being short, and I will do many exercises, so I will try to increase my height.

>> Correct or (I will do many exercises that will help me become taller.)

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