Are you contented with your height? Why or why not?
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Hi Ji Su! ^^
A sunny afternoon to you ^^
Thank you for going over this composition and sending it to me. :)
Even me, I\'m not that tall :D I\'m just 158cm but it\'s okay, I also feel good with my height.
And you are already beautiful as you are, dear. :)
See you! ^^
Teacher Glenda
Honestly, I\'m a bit contented with my height cause I\'m a little bit small than the other kids.
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>> Honestly, I\'m contented with height because I\'m a little bit small than other kids.
For example, the average height of fourth graders are 145, but I\'m 136.
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So that is my complex.
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But in the article, a fifty year old man named Mr.Basori is just 29 inches(73.66cm) and he already stopped growing.
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But I\'m able to grow more than Mr. [Name], and I\'m already taller than him.
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Like Mr. [Name], I would not have a complex of being short, and I will do many exercises, so I will try to increase my height.
>> Correct or (I will do many exercises that will help me become taller.)
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