Are you generally a positive person or a negative person?
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Are you generally a positive person or a negative person?
In my opinion, I generally a positive person. This is because, I usually think positive, when I am in a negative situation. For example, When I was senior student, I participated in school project. I took care of data that we use in PowerPoint. So, I gave it to presentation student. However, my teammates didn’t come in time. At that situation, I had to solve the problem, so, I thought that I can present the project. Maybe, because of mt positive thinking that I can do presentation. Always to be a positive person is hard, however, the think that we can do everything is most important to be a positive person.
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Hello, Mr. [이름] [이름]! Thank you for sharing something about yourself. I think an optimistic attitude helps us be happier, healthier, and more successful.
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In my opinion, I generally a positive person.
>>In my opinion, I am generally a positive person.
This is because, I usually think positive, when I am in a negative situation.
>>This is because I usually think positively even when I am in a negative situation.
For example, When I was senior student, I participated in school project.
>>For example, as a university senior, I participated in a school project.
I took care of data that we use in PowerPoint.
>>I took care of the data that we had to use for the PowerPoint presentation.
So, I gave it to presentation student.
>>Then, I gave it to the presenter.
However, my teammates didn’t come in time.
>>However, my teammates didn’t come on time.
At that situation, I had to solve the problem, so, I thought that I can present the project.
>>In that situation, I had to solve the problem, so, I thought that I could present the project.
Maybe, because of mt positive thinking that I can do presentation.
>>Maybe, it was because of my optimism that I was able to take over and do the presentation.
Always to be a positive person is hard,
>>Being optimistic all the time is hard.
however, the think that we can do everything is most important to be a positive person.
>>However, the thought that we can do everything is the most important to be an optimistic person.
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