Are you good at getting things done on time? Explain your answer 4-5 sentences.

2019-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 James

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I am not sure i am good at getting things done on time. but, i try to do what i have to do on time. I believe that to do in time we picked up is our ability or responability. Therefore, i will be willing to do on time to grow my ability i said.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for the effort to answer your homework. Have a good day.
T. James
Whenever i travel , i always bring a camera and sunglasses.
>>> Whenever I travel, I always bring a camera and sunglasses.
Firstly, a camera helps me to save every moments and memories.
>>> Firstly, a camera helps me to save every moment and memories.
Also , i want to record my story.
>>> Also, I want to record my story.
So, when i see it again, i can remind that time i traveled.
>>> So, when I see it again, I can remember that time I traveled.
Secondly, sunglasses is protecting my eyes. I look and see touristic places for many hours.
>>> Secondly, sunglasses are protecting my eyes. I look and see touristic places for many hours.
Thus, i feel my eyes are tired easily.
>>> Thus, I feel my eyes are tired easily.
Therefore, i pick up a camera and sunglasses evey time for my trip.
>>> Therefore, I pick up a camera and sunglasses every time for my trip.

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