Are you good at planning? Do you always follow your plan? Why or why not?

2024-10-03 · 첨삭 강사 Demi

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I\'m really good at planning. I\'m really pride of it. When I did a MBTI test, J % is almost 100%. Planning makes me do an assignment in time, But, I always do not follow my plan. Because, I plan my day schedule so heavily. But I like it because I do my best so harder. I will keep doing this.

강사 첨삭

Hello Nicole,
Another great composition! Continue doing your best. I am proud of you :)
~ T. Demi ^^

I\'m really good at planning. I\'m really pride of it.
>> I\'m really good at planning and I am proud of it.
When I did a MBTI test, J % is almost 100%.
>> When I had my MBTI test the percentage of J was almost 100%.
Planning makes me do an assignment in time,
>> Planning makes me finish my assignment on time.
But, I always do not follow my plan.
>> However, I don\'t always follow my plan.
Because, I plan my day schedule so heavily.
>> Because I plan my daily schedule heavily.
But I like it because I do my best so harder.
>> But I like it because I can work harder and do my best.
I will keep doing this.
>> I will continue doing this.

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