Are you good at staying calm in stressful situations? Please explain your answer.
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Recently a lot of people have experience stress from somethings.
>>Recently, many people experience stress from something.
It means that they get stress from a variety of route like as daily life or relationship with friends.
>>This means that they are stressed from various reasons, such as daily life and relationships with friends.
I knew that it is very difficult to suppress when i get stress.
>>I find it very difficult to control stress.
But I found out some solutions how to deal with stress efficiently.
>>But I\'ve found some ways to deal with stress effectively.
First of all you have to calm down about any situations.
>>First of all, you have to calm down in any other circumstances.
Suddenly It occur to us, we are ambarrassed and can not think about it appropriately.
>>It can ocur suddenly. You might be too embarrassed to think properly.
Second I always listen to music for mind control.
>>Second, I always listen to music for mind control.
So, I effort to have positive thinking.
>>So I try to have positive thinking.
Finally hobby is great for stress.
>>Lastly, having a hobby is a great way to deal with stress.
If i concentrate my favorite things, It is very help to me for cut down stress
>>If I focus on things I like, it can reduce the stress and it\'s very helpful.
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