Are you good at staying calm in stressful situations? Please explain your answer.

2019-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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Recently a lot of people have experience stress from somethings. It means that they get stress from a variety of route like as daily life or relationship with friends. I knew that it is very difficult to suppress when i get stress. But I found out some solutions how to deal with stress efficiently. First of all you have to calm down about any situations. Suddenly It occur to us, we are ambarrassed and can not think about it appropriately. Second I always listen to music for mind control. So, I effort to have positive thinking. Finally hobby is great for stress. If i concentrate my favorite things, It is very help to me for cut down stress

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Happy Friday Mr. [이름]!

I am glad you were able to express your thoughts about the given question! Thank you!


Recently a lot of people have experience stress from somethings.
>>Recently, many people experience stress from something.
It means that they get stress from a variety of route like as daily life or relationship with friends.
>>This means that they are stressed from various reasons, such as daily life and relationships with friends.
I knew that it is very difficult to suppress when i get stress.
>>I find it very difficult to control stress.
But I found out some solutions how to deal with stress efficiently.
>>But I\'ve found some ways to deal with stress effectively.
First of all you have to calm down about any situations.
>>First of all, you have to calm down in any other circumstances.
Suddenly It occur to us, we are ambarrassed and can not think about it appropriately.
>>It can ocur suddenly. You might be too embarrassed to think properly.
Second I always listen to music for mind control.
>>Second, I always listen to music for mind control.
So, I effort to have positive thinking.
>>So I try to have positive thinking.
Finally hobby is great for stress.
>>Lastly, having a hobby is a great way to deal with stress.
If i concentrate my favorite things, It is very help to me for cut down stress
>>If I focus on things I like, it can reduce the stress and it\'s very helpful.

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