Are you happy with the government assistance of old people in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear Teacher Don,
Of course, I am very happy with goverment support. Many people are proud of this system.
When I get a sick over 70 ~80 age, if I get a caregiving service from my goverment, there is no better than this. In Korea we hav a good Nation Health insureance system.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy Friday! I know how exciting your are for the weekend. Thank you for doing your composition. See you later in our class ^^
T. DON
Of course, I am very happy with goverment support. Many people are proud of this system.
>> Of course, I am very happy with the government support. Many people are proud of this system.
When I get a sick over 70 ~80 age, if I get a caregiving service from my
goverment, there is no better than this. In Korea we hav a good Nation
Health insureance system.
>> When I\'m 70 to 80 years old and I get sick, the government will provide us care givers which I can say is important for the elderly. In Korea, we have a good National Health insurance system.
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