Are you happy with the programs on TV nowadays?
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually I am interested in watching on TV program, such as a history trip, current event that is caused of the argument,
performance of music and show. Because when I got stressed out ,that makes me relaxed .
In addition to ,the broadcasting of several different channel,on line internet and you tube program is also popular.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
Those are some good expressions you used there.
You can give supporting statements to express yourself better.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Actually I am interested in watching on TV program, such as a history trip, current event that is caused of the argument, performance of music and show.
>> Actually I am interested in watching TV programs, such as trips to historical places, controversial current events and musical performances.
Because when I got stressed out ,that makes me relaxed .
Because when I got stressed out ,that makes me relaxed .
>> It\'s because these kinds of shows make me feel relaxed.
In addition to ,the broadcasting of several different channel on line internet and you tube program is also popular.
In addition to ,the broadcasting of several different channel on line internet and you tube program is also popular.
>> In addition, broadcasting of several channels on the internet and also YouTube programs also became popular.
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