Are you happy with your personality? Would you like to be different?
학생이 쓴 원문
I tend to avoid the situations when I am upset to my boyfriend or friends.
That is the thing I would like to change the most in my personality.
I feel ashamed to tell my emotions to others.
But if I don\'t tell what I am feeling to others, they never can\'t know that and I\'ll think worse situation than the reality.
I would like be a mature person who can be honest with my emotions to maintain healthy relationships with others.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]. Thank you for sending your homework. It is a good read. I believe many people can relate to that. Nobody\'s perfect but we do what we have to do to change. I think you are already a mature person for wanting to be more honest with your emotions. I appreciate your composition and I look forward to more. Have a good one. ~Jane c\",)
I tend to avoid the situations when I am upset to my boyfriend or friends.
>>> I tend to avoid situations when I am upset with my boyfriend or friends.
That is the thing I would like to change the most in my personality.
>>> CORRECT =)
I feel ashamed to tell my emotions to others.
>>> CORRECT =)
But if I don\'t tell what I am feeling to others, they never can\'t know that and I\'ll think worse situation than the reality.
>>> But if I do not tell what I am feeling to others, they can never know that and I will think worse of the situation that it is in reality.
I would like be a mature person who can be honest with my emotions to maintain healthy relationships with others.
>>> CORRECT =)
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