Are you having a nice day?

2010-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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Are you having a nice day? I always tried having a meaningful English day by myself !! As you may know, I failed to find a friend who is also learning English, because I'm kind of busy! To make a friend , I feel like joining any kind of English club and I'm not available,recently! My English speaking looks like slowly improving and stuffy! But I don't worry about that, on a second thougt , with constantly practice English speaking ,I can be good at it! As what you said , I do not lush! However, there are many thing to learn, it seems to take a lot of time! I think,the manual that we.re studing is very effective and helpful! Your proofreading in my composition is also memorable and easy to remember! Thank you ! I will be waiting for your call on Friday! See you then!

강사 첨삭

Hi, Martin!^^ I’m so glad to read your composition again. Keep on writing. It’s a good practice for your grammar and vocabulary. Make it a habit to speak English everyday! Happy weekend!^^   Are you having a nice day? >>>okayI always tried having a meaningful English day by myself !! >>>I always try to have a meaningful English day by myself.As you may know, I failed to find a friend who is also learning English, because I'm kind of busy! >>>For your information, I failed in looking for a friend who is also learning English because I’m kind of busy.To make a friend , I feel like joining any kind of English club and I'm not available,recently! >>>In order for me to look for a friend I am looking for, I thought of joining an English club but I don’t have time for it.My English speaking looks like slowly improving and stuffy! >>>My English speaking seems improving gradually.But I don't worry about that, on a second thought, with constantly practice English speaking ,I can be good at it! >>>I’m not worried about that. On a second thought, with constant English speaking practice, I can be good at it!As what you said , I do not lush! However, there are many thing to learn, it seems to take a lot of time! >>>As what you have said, I don’t have to rush. It seems that I have to take a lot of time because there are many things to learn.I think,the manual that we.re studing is very effective and helpful! >>>I think the manual that we are using for our practiceis very effective and very helpful!Your proofreading in my composition is also memorable and easy to remember! >>>okay  Thank you ! >>>correct >>>Thank you!I will be waiting for your call on Friday! See you then! >>>correct

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