Are you in favor of using it for medical purposes?
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Hello [이름] [이름]! thank you for this. You do have a point. Proper control and regulation imposed on the use of this substance is necessary.
- T. Beth
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It is common to use it for medical purposes in some countries.
>>> CORRECT.
If it would makes patients to reduce a pain, I will agree with selcting it.
>>> If it would reduce the patient\'s pain, I will agree with using it.
what are the most important for doctor except reducing pain?
>>> What is more important to doctors other than reducing the pain?
But The hospital which deal with it must be under controlled by the government as related peson who are work in specific hospital has a possibilities to use it for other purposes like a cri[이름]al.
>>> But the hospital which deals with it must be under the government\'s control as related person who are working in the specific hospital has possibilities to use it for other purposes like a crime.
By co[이름]g with responsibilies for the staffs, The other purposes will be prevented.
>>> By imposing responsibilities on the staff, the other purposes will be prevented.
Related persons don`t keep some manuals about it, some penalties will be imposed to the staffs thoroughly.
>>> If affiliated people don\'t keep a manual of it, some penalties should be imposed to the staff thoroughly.
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