Are you influenced by what you see on TV? Or by what you read? Please explain a bit.
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Yes, I\'m influenced by what I saw on TV a lot.
Actually, more the Internet than a TV.
Because the reason why I started weight training is that I saw a celebrity who has a brilliant body.
Since then, I started weight training by my own with the methods that I saw in the Internet.
Because of this, I was able to grow myself by the weight training.
And also I listened a lot of news on TV, and I was able to grow my mindset.
Because of these cases, I can say that I\'m influenced by the things that I saw in TV.
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>>Yes, I\'m influenced by what I see on TV a lot.
Actually, more the Internet than a TV.
Actually, more the Internet than a TV.
>>Actually, more from the Internet than a TV.
Because the reason why I started weight training is that I saw a celebrity who has a brilliant body.
Because the reason why I started weight training is that I saw a celebrity who has a brilliant body.
>>Because the reason why I started weight training was when I saw a celebrity who has a brilliant body.
Since then, I started weight training by my own with the methods that I saw in the Internet.
Since then, I started weight training by my own with the methods that I saw in the Internet.
>>Since then, I started weight training on my own with the methods that I saw on the Internet.
Because of this, I was able to grow myself by the weight training.
Because of this, I was able to grow myself by the weight training.
>>CORRECT
And also I listened a lot of news on TV, and I was able to grow my mindset.
And also I listened a lot of news on TV, and I was able to grow my mindset.
>>And also I listened to a lot of news on TV, and I was able to improve my mindset.
Because of these cases, I can say that I\'m influenced by the things that I saw in TV.
Because of these cases, I can say that I\'m influenced by the things that I saw in TV.
>>Because of these cases, I can say that I\'m influenced by the things that I saw on TV.
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