Are you interested in the air miles and free gifts you can get by using your credit card?

2014-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I take additional benefits that I can get into consideration when I choose a credit card, although credit card companies have recently reduced such benefit programs to a minimum. They used to offer a mile per 1,000 won spending and other benefits such as a 50% discount at certain franchised restaurants, coffee shops, movie theaters, theme parks, and so on. However, due to their reduced profits, they have stopped or changed such programs. Although they are vigorously advertising their superiority including such benefits over their competitors, the real benefits you can get is just small, considering the effort you have to make. Especially the old people are not keen on such additional programs because they should be a tech savvy or get themselves updated with the latest information provided by the card companies to get the benefits. You need to even study to get to know what benefits are available for you. If not, tbenefits will just disappear. Is it really worth spending your energy?

강사 첨삭

Perfect composition, Sir [이름]!

Happy Friday to you! I hope that you feel better now.

It is really nice to have additional benefits but some are not that really helpful for people.

There are some benefits that are just advertised, not true.

Thank you for sharing your ideas about this topic.

Maybe we can discuss this more in our class.

Get well soon. Take Care!
Teacher Nina


I take additional benefits that I can get into consideration when I choose a credit card, although credit card companies have recently reduced such benefit programs to a minimum.

>> correct

They used to offer a mile per 1,000 won spending and other benefits such as a 50% discount at certain franchised restaurants, coffee shops, movie theaters, theme parks, and so on.

>> correct

However, due to their reduced profits, they have stopped or changed such programs.

>> correct

Although they are vigorously advertising their superiority including such benefits over their competitors, the real benefits you can get is just small, considering the effort you have to make.

>> correct

Especially the old people are not keen on such additional programs because they should be a tech savvy or get themselves updated with the latest information provided by the card companies to get the benefits.

>> correct

You need to even study to get to know what benefits are available for you.

>> correct

If not, tbenefits will just disappear.

>> correct

Is it really worth spending your energy?

>> correct

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