Are you nervous when you are introduced to someone new?

2019-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

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I always neverous when i introduce to someone new or to make an announcement on the podium, in those circumstances, and that mood make me crazy, because the cold atmosphere surrounds me also silence choke me. than i might stuttered and lost my words. It\'s just an imaginary situation, but it\'s actually going to happen countless times. i always interesting to get to know about someone new, really, and I am sure that we will have a good friendship someday. but i can\'t stand an awkward relationship when we are not close That moment when i first met someone is most painful time to me. Although it\'s moment hard for everyone, i still attractive to met stranger even i don\'t know and it will continue to be attractive for me

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I admire your courage to meet strangers despite being anxious when meeting them. Just keep yourself open to meet new people. Have a good day!~~T.Dee   


I always neverous when i introduce to someone new or to make an announcement on the podium, in those circumstances, and that mood make me crazy, 

>>I always feel nervous when I am introduced to someone new or  when I have to make an announcement on the podium.  Similar circumstances with the same mood makes me go crazy. 
 because the cold atmosphere surrounds me also silence choke me. than i might stuttered and lost my words.

>>It will feel that the my surroundings will be cold and the silence chokes me. Then, I might stutter and lose my words.
 It\'s just an imaginary situation, but it\'s actually going to happen countless times.

>> t\'s just an imaginary situation, but it\'s actually going to happen countless times.
i always interesting to get to know about someone new, really, and I am sure that we will have a good friendship someday.

>>Actually, I am always interested to get to know someone new and I am sure that we will have a good friendship someday.

but i can\'t stand an awkward relationship when we are not close

>>But I can\'t stand an awkward relationship when we are not close
That moment when i first met someone is most painful time to me.

>>That moment of our first meeting is the most crucial to me.
 Although it\'s moment hard for everyone, i still attractive to met stranger even i don\'t know and it will continue to be attractive for me

>>Although this is not easy for everyone, I am still interested to meet a stranger even if I don\'t know him or her.

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