Are you nervous when you are introduced to someone new?
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Hello [이름]! I admire your courage to meet strangers despite being anxious when meeting them. Just keep yourself open to meet new people. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
I always neverous when i introduce to someone new or to make an announcement on the podium, in those circumstances, and that mood make me crazy,
>>I always feel nervous when I am introduced to someone new or when I have to make an announcement on the podium. Similar circumstances with the same mood makes me go crazy.
because the cold atmosphere surrounds me also silence choke me. than i might stuttered and lost my words.
>>It will feel that the my surroundings will be cold and the silence chokes me. Then, I might stutter and lose my words.
It\'s just an imaginary situation, but it\'s actually going to happen countless times.
>> t\'s just an imaginary situation, but it\'s actually going to happen countless times.
i always interesting to get to know about someone new, really, and I am sure that we will have a good friendship someday.
>>Actually, I am always interested to get to know someone new and I am sure that we will have a good friendship someday.
but i can\'t stand an awkward relationship when we are not close
>>But I can\'t stand an awkward relationship when we are not close
That moment when i first met someone is most painful time to me.
>>That moment of our first meeting is the most crucial to me.
Although it\'s moment hard for everyone, i still attractive to met stranger even i don\'t know and it will continue to be attractive for me
>>Although this is not easy for everyone, I am still interested to meet a stranger even if I don\'t know him or her.
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