Are you optimistic when it comes to your financial future?
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Always aim for the best by not settling for good, Sir [이름]!
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Unemployment rate in Korea is getting high and government still doesn\'t find the best solution.
>>> The unemployment rate in Korea is getting high and our government still doesn\'t find the best solution.
Our government has decided to rise quite high amount of minimum wage this year and they thought it will effect for the people good way.
>>> Our government has decided to rise the minimum wage this year, and they thought it will affect the people in good ways.
>>> OR: >>> Our government has decided to make the minimum wage higher this year, and they thought it will affect the people in good ways.
However, it seems like that it is going worse because the owner can\'t afford to pay salary for part time job due to the rising of minimum wage.
>>> However, it seems like it is going worse because the owner can\'t afford to pay the salary of part-timers due to rising of the minimum wage.
I have a stable job and it is almost impossible I will be fired from my company.
>>> I have a stable job, and it is almost impossible for me to get fired from my company.
>>> OR: It\'s impossible for me to be laid off from the company because I\'m a regular employee.
It is lucky for me to choose this job.
>>> Correct!
>>> I\'m too lucky to have this job.
I had a same problem like youth has suffered these day.
>>> I had the same problem like youths have suffered these days.
I am planning to move my company if I have a chance and I have been studying English constantly, because it might be my strength.
>>> I am planning to move to another company if I have a chance, and I have been studying English constantly, because it might be my strength.
I believe that people who are ready for something get a chance and I think my future will be bright because I am the well prepared person.
>>> I believe that people who are ready for something get a chance, and I also think that my future will be bright because I am well-prepared.
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