Are you pro-life, or pro-choice? Why, and how do you see the opposing viewpoint?
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I absolutely agree with you, Sir [이름].
Parents should be really responsible in raising their kids.
If there will be a nursing facility and a sound adoption program, I am sure that the lives of the babies will be really great.
They will be provided with a lot of things.
Hopefully this will happen in the future.
Teacher Nina
I am a bit standing on the side pro-choice although I respect the fact that life is precious and it should be protected at any cost.
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>> Did you mean: I am a bit in favor of pro-choice although I respect the fact that life is previous and it should be protected at any cost.
Life is important more than anything else.
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That’s why it should be decided discreetly whether to have a baby or not.
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Thinking about the future of those who are abandoned or abused by their biological parents, we cannot simply say that once someone is pregnant, she must deliver a baby regardless of her will or difficult situations.
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>> When we think about the future of those who are abandoned or abused by their biological parents, we cannot simply say that once someone is pregnant, she must deliver a baby regardless of her will or difficult situations.
Once they decide to give a birth to a baby, they have to hold themselves accountable for raising their baby with care and love.
>> Once they decide to give birth to a baby, they have to hold themselves accountable for raising him/ her with care and love.
>> Once they decide to give birth to a baby, they should be responsible in raising him/ her with full of love.
In addition, our society also should take a responsibility for the issue.
>> In addition, our society should take responsibility for the issue.
>> In addition, our society is also responsible about the issue.
We should have a system like a nursing facility and a sound adoption program so that the babies abandoned by their parents could grow and live a decent life without their basic human rights infringed.
>> We should have a system like a nursing facility and a sound adoption program so that the babies who were abandoned by their parents could grow and live a decent life without their basic human rights infringed.
We should not leave the matter to an individual because it is a social issue as well.
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Without having such social systems in place,
>> To be continued ^^
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