Are you pro-life, or pro-choice? Why, and how do you see the opposing viewpoint?
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Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing your opinion. This question has been a topic in a debate.
Each side has possible and understandable opinions. It\'s just a matter of choice between
morality and practicality. Have a nice day! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
First of all, I have to decide if fetus is human being.
>> First of all, I have to decide whether a fetus is a human being.
I think that fetus is human being but I am pro-choice.
>> I think that fetus is a human being but I am a pro-choice.
I don\'t think delivering disabled babies is the best choice for parents.
>> CORRECT
Babies who have a disease that can\'t be treated with current medical skills is also problem in our society.
>> Babies who have a disease that can\'t be treated with new medical treatments is also problem in our society.
I can fully understand why mothers don\'t want to deliver disabled babies.
>> CORRECT
It is said that bringing up disabled babies is the blessing and be taught parents about the life.
>> It is said that bringing up disabled babies is a blessing and can be taught by parents about life.
I have seen many people who are suffering from financial problems because of unwanted babies.
>> CORRECT
Single mother and teenager mother are also a problem in our society.
>> Single mothers and teenage mothers are also a problem in our society.
Students can commit a mistake because they are really curious about everything while they are living in the society.
>> Students can commit a mistake because they are really curious about everything.
They would like to challenge anything that they didn\'t try before.
>> They like to challenge themselves from doing things they haven\'t tried.
They might feel nervous and scared having babies without any preparation.
>> They might feel nervous and scared of unwanted pregnancies.
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