Are you pro-life, or pro-choice? Why, and how do you see the opposing viewpoint?

2019-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

First of all, I have to decide if fetus is human being. I think that fetus is human being but I am pro-choice. I don\'t think delivering disabled babies is the best choice for parents. Babies who have a disease that can\'t be treated with current medical skills is also problem in our society. I can fully understand why mothers don\'t want to deliver disabled babies. It is said that bringing up disabled babies is the blessing and be taught parents about the life. I have seen many people who are suffering from financial problems because of unwanted babies. Single mother and teenager mother are also a problem in our society. Students can commit a mistake because they are really curious about everything while they are living in the society. They would like to challenge anything that they didn\'t try before. They might feel nervous and scared having babies without any preparation.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing your opinion. This question has been a topic in a debate.

Each side has possible and understandable opinions. It\'s just a matter of choice between

morality and practicality. Have a nice day! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

First of all, I have to decide if fetus is human being.

>> First of all, I have to decide whether a fetus is a human being.

I think that fetus is human being but I am pro-choice.

>> I think that fetus is a human being but I am a pro-choice.

I don\'t think delivering disabled babies is the best choice for parents.

>> CORRECT

Babies who have a disease that can\'t be treated with current medical skills is also problem in our society.

>> Babies who have a disease that can\'t be treated with new medical treatments is also problem in our society.

I can fully understand why mothers don\'t want to deliver disabled babies.

>> CORRECT

It is said that bringing up disabled babies is the blessing and be taught parents about the life. 

>> It is said that bringing up disabled babies is a blessing and can be taught by parents about life. 

I have seen many people who are suffering from financial problems because of unwanted babies. 

>> CORRECT
Single mother and teenager mother are also a problem in our society.

>> Single mothers and teenage mothers are also a problem in our society.

Students can commit a mistake because they are really curious about everything while they are living in the society.

>> Students can commit a mistake because they are really curious about everything.

They would like to challenge anything that they didn\'t try before.

>> They like to challenge themselves from doing things they haven\'t tried.

They might feel nervous and scared having babies without any preparation.

>> They might feel nervous and scared of unwanted pregnancies.

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